In this Thread, tell the person above you, your first impressions of their shop. Good news, and bad news are all helpful.
Former_Member
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First WELCOME to Etsy! You have a strong start.

Second tutu = luu luu I like it!

Third beautiful presentation. Your demo will be happy the minute they see the colorful banner. I wish you success.

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KattsKreations1
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Atomicrocketpoplab....
Your shop has some very interesting items that are well organized.....You have informative descriptions and your photos look pretty good, but I would brighten them up a bit :) The only other thing I noticed right away was your banner is missing your shop name, I would defintely add that ...
Good Job...I wish you much success, and I showed you page some love :)
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Hi Katt: Cute Shop! Great bright photos. Good common theme and well organized look. Nice intermix of live models. Nice concise shop policies. I showed your "live model" listings a little "love".
:)
Debbie
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hello! You have a cozy shop. Photos are good sized and all items are in one scale on it. Very nice pillows. I wish you happy sales! :)

Maha
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Hello maha zero-zero!
I really like your dolls, they're so original! I've never seen something alike before. I wish that I could see more of your works, not just three. The photos are great and good sized.
I wish you much success in tour sales! :)
Anastasiya
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Anastasia Korolova
I love the pictures in your shop. I love how you are clear on your production and shipping times.
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Lemondropmemories,
I like your shop. I think you should use all 5 photos and more keywords
for your items.
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Solviashop

I really love your shop! You have a large variety of items to choose from and your photos all look very professional! I wish you best of luck innyour success!
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It's a lovely concept, and a lovely enough shop. The pricing is reasonable too. One thing I'd like to improve would be to re-size the thumbnail shots of your listings -- it would be more appealing for buyers if they could see an entire shot of your merchandise in one go. Also, if you could re-take pictures of your listings, a plain vanilla white or light background would make for more appealing merchandising. Brown burlap on brown wooden background doesn't give your wreaths the "oomph!" they deserve. A painted white wooden background would make for a nicer contrast.

Also, you might want to add in keywords to your listings' title so they'll show up more frequently in buyers' searches. Your keyword tags are fine enough, although you might consider adding in or replacing a few of your keywords with:

rustic decor
door decor
door wreath / door wreaths / front door wreath
wall wreath / wall wreaths
handmade wreath
custom wreath
party wreath
spring wreath
wedding wreath
rustic wedding
housewarming gift

If you'd like more suggestions for keywords, sign up for the app Etsyrank.com

https://etsyrank.com/

It's absolutely free and they check your keywords and spellings for you. You can also see which keywords other top sellers with similar merchandise to yours use, and take your cue from there.

Best of luck!
Luce

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JaxtonandJill
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Lacy,
Wow love the shop banner very professional looking.
the problem I see is your listings they are so stark white they don't draw anyone in. maybe adding a model to wear your jewelry and product, shake it up a little.
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Hi Dawnel !

I just discovered such a beautiful shop...

Your work is simply magnificent... WOW ! I'm in love with what you do.
I do embroidery myself (embroidered wishes on wishing cards)... still don't sell on Etsy... yet !!!

Your shop banner brings anyone back to their childish years. It did for me, anyway. There is a very strong sense of youth... Very colorful ! Nice job !

Your descriptions are very clear.
Your tags are also great.. I may try to use some other keywords as embroidery, embroidered letter, embroidered name, embroidered story, baby, embroidery to remember, youth, young.... but really it's my only humble advice...

I would like to give you more, but what I see is so great already !

Keep up the good work !!

Sincerely,

Rose-Marie ;-)
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Hi Rose- Merie

Your jewelry are beautiful and looks great .
The pictures looks good as well but I think that you should take a picture on model. It will be easy to see how it looks on person .
I think this will help you get a lot of sales because you are doing great job.

Wishing you all the best :))))

Lena
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OliveHats

I love your use of color.
Site makes me happy.
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hello Mr .Mackin i think you have a lovely shop , its really unique ideas . your shop maked me smile :)
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IslandvibesDesigns I really like the feel of the items you have on your page. (I travel quite a bit to the islands and love that internal feeling I get when I am there, and I feel that when I look at the items you have posted).
I guess the only thing I would recommend, is, if possible, add more items to your line up.
All the patterns you have are just right for someone looking for the feel and color - at least for me ;) .
Kirby
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Kirby Foster when I first glanced at your shop I was like WOW! Nice!!! I need to improve my shop 100%.
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Hi April,
Your shop is not showing up for me on your profile. Im in Australia but that shouldn't matter.
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Items are perfect, but I personally don't like dark background. But if it's just your shop style -good.

But I would prefer like this

https://www.etsy.com/listing/252743382/butterfly-pendant-glass-winged-butterfly?ref=shop_home_active...
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Julia, I love the name, you really should get some more items listed. I am sure that they would be great.
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Thank you, Kirby, I do my best to make more items, but it takes time to create more. Hope soon =)
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Hello,
I hope I choose the right person / shop.
So this is my review for Julia and her shop kidphilosophy:
- My first impression when I look at the listings was, wow what a cute kid!
So 100 points for the model :-)
- The next thought that came to my mind was, hm same color of almost all listings. Maybe different colors would create variety.
- Linen and light colors makes me think about stains and how to remove them. You could add washing advices, I guess you have a lot of experience with that fabric.
- The thought of summer clothes could maybe be more intense by taking pictures in nature?!
- Fair pricing, I like that!
- I can feel the positive vibes through your work

Good job!
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Former_Member
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Sorta got skipped on the last post, so, here it is again after letting Mark know how cool his shop is!
Love the shop, for years wanted natural carved wood at my house, and was finally able to find someone that could do it, but, their work pales in comparison to yours!
I would add more to the shop when possible. (I know, work and effort, but it is so worth it on Etsy, you will get a very large and loyal following with your talents.)
Now, only if you were in Jersey to be able to carve a tree that I am saving for that exact purpose.
Good luck,
Kirby
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LIV
Bright & Colorful

🎄Ruth Ann
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Hello Ruth Ann, Love your shop idea. Hope that it brings a lot of sales and planted trees. I live at the edge of Olympic National Park because I love living in the trees. Great work.

I think that your banner photo could be more crisp and clear and the first sentence in your shop announcement should be reworded. Other than that I think you have a great shop.

Happy sales.
Terry
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Former_Member
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Hello Kirby,

thank you very much for reviewing our shop and favoring the items.

Carving a whole tree is something I never tried before. Cottonwood bark pieces are very nice working material. It carves like butter, because it is bark and dried for at least half a year.

I will send you a private message referring other carvers that are living closer to you. And I'm going to review your shop.
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