In this Thread, tell the person above you, your first impressions of their shop. Good news, and bad news are all helpful.

Re: First Impressions

Hello Selena, (NICE NAME!)

I love your photography, it really captures the jewellery and items you offer, shows the colour and details

I think the descriptions is where I would focus. You offer great details.
But it is a lot to read. Thinking along mobile users also, maybe state in point form at the top, Material, key features, and your added service value.

Just brief bullet point and then your long description below.
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Re: First Impressions

hi Selena!
my first impressions:
first the negative: i love the banner BUT i dont think it has anything to do with what you're selling. Like if i were to see your banner, i would have no clue what youre selling.
i am all about simplicity and even though i love having one contrast item in a photo for perspective sake, i think yours are too busy. i think the little colored soaps take away from the cases, and distract away from the beauty of them. LESS IS MORE kinda thing. The butterfly watercolor one looks amazing without the little soaps !
NOW what I LOOOOOVE are those little crowns you have by each heading in your descriptions! Super clever. Other than that i wouldnt change a thing!
BEST OF LUCK with your cases !
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OLiveHats: I really liked all your hats, very nicely presented. Unfortunately, the translation in French is not really good and does not always correspond to something.
But your hats are beautiful!! Good luck to you!
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Hello Capucine from capucineetfanny

Wow... nice products, nice presentation, just the right amount of daylight making all your errings pop with such beauty. I have a lot to learn from your shop.
The best of luck

Regards.
Akosua
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You have magnificent works! Great store!

https://www.etsy.com/shop/BestGiftToy?ref=seller-platform-mcnav

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@BestGiftToy 

your shop lift up a smile on my face. Your dollies are so cute.
Great pictures, nice stuff!

https://www.etsy.com/shop/ParadiseOfColors

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