LillyBeanOnline
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constructive criticism

Hi, would you please take a look at my shop and let me know what improvements I can make? Or what items I should offer?

Thanks so much!

Kate
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I'm not sure how helpful this is, but I think your shop is gorgeous. Your shop banner is bright and appropriate, your photos are great and Your descriptions are also good. Keep up the good work.
Happy Sales,
Kathy
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Your shop title should say what you sell, rather than repeating the name of your shop. So where you have "Welcome to Lilly Bean Boutique Online!" I suggest you change it to "custom invitations, cards and tags." Google searches the shop title as well as your listings so changing that line will help with SEO.
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This may be an odd suggestion but I suggest having dog invitations. Some people treat their dogs like kids and might have a dog party. Just a thought.
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LillyBeanOnline
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Re: constructive criticism

Thanks so much for the input! I will make those changes and come up with some dog invites! We just got a puppy so I totally get people going crazy over their dogs!

Kate
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