Critique Please? :)

HI! i had a shop critique a couple weeks ago and i have changed EVERYTHING! Im very happy with the changes i have made so far and am asking your advice on how its looking now! THANKS :)

P.S. I upload items daily

- amanda
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Former_Member
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Amanda you should change your shop sections to remove the spaces. Search engines can not read the actual words (because of the extra spaces) and therefore you will lose out on many potential buyers finding your shop.
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Hi Amanda,

I'm really not sure what you are selling as your shop announcement simply states "International Customers please contact me if you are interested in an item"

If you really think about it, everyone on Etsy is an 'international customer' depending on where the shop and buyer are located.

When it comes to refunds, you only refund if the purchase price is under $75 and for store credit only? I find that a bit odd myself. If you aren't willing to refund on an item, a buyer simply needs to file a claim through their credit card company to get their money back.

Your descriptions are really lacking in details. If you are selling clothing I'd suggest that you provide actual measurements rather than 'size small'. What size is size small? I've got clothes in my closet from various manufacturers that run the gamut from small to large.

Saying 'this sweater is really cute' really doesn't tell me anything about the sweater. What's it made of? What are the measurements? What colour is it?

Remember too that if you don't have shipping listed for a specific country, that buyers from that country simply don't see what you are offering unless they go digging. So if you are going to ship outside of your own country, I'd suggest that you do the investigation into the postal rates and set them up accordingly.
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luludilivingart
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hi everybody....
Amanda - how did you get a shop critique? i feel like i could certainly use one!
good for you to have changed following the critique. looks crisper BUT i would have to agree with crochetgal that having that one line re International Customers does not invite anyone in. it doesn’t say what you love and what inspires you...Anyone want to take a look at my shop and see what i can do a little differently for more sales?
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