http://www.etsy.com/listing/120996236/shades-of-blue-waxed-cords-necklace-withI love this necklace but did not realize it until I clicked on the listing page
necklace should be in your listing along with blue.
-work on writing titles with descriptions that describe what people are looking for like blue necklace.
-create and overall appeal and about page that tells why you have these designs-personalize your gossip
-listings are a bit dark and the white background just is not working for me.
but I do like the one picture below.
This picture does o good job of showcasing colors and is there a chance you could have a model.
-your descriptions are a but technical. I just don't know about the jewelery making but I want to read a story behind it. Make me imagine wearing it with my clothes to a lunch or something.
-who is your target market?
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