✦ Online Labs: Participate in a Listing Critique ✦

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A live listing critique will be held in the Online Labs on August 27th @ 12pm EST. To view the critique the day of, visit the following link: https://www.etsy.com/community/online-labs

We asked you to submit your listings in a previous discussion and the results are in!* Below you will find the three listings that the Seller Development Team chose for the critique session, along with three questions that focus on keywords.

We would love for all of you to participate by critiquing these three listings before the live event, your advice could be prominently featured in Etsy's Online Labs Listing Critique on August 27th!

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① Identify at least one thing you really like about the title and one thing you think could be improved. Think about what information the title provides and which words are most impactful.

② How would you re-write this title?

③ How many tags were used? What other tags would you recommend?

https://www.etsy.com/listing/195940704/
https://www.etsy.com/listing/197351505/
https://www.etsy.com/listing/198108047/

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Thanks again to all of you who volunteered your listings for this critique! We're looking forward to reading all the wonderful advice that you have to share with these 3 sellers!
❤ - Clare
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* Listing submissions for this session closed on Monday, August 4, to find out more about how listings were submitted, please view this discussion: https://www.etsy.com/teams/5002/etsy-success/discuss/15006378/
** Please refrain from posting links to listings other than the three listed above, this is not a promotional Team.

[Former_Member]

Hi Fellow Creative Minds!

I am having a hard time getting sales to go up with the start of my etsy shop. I would really appreciate some constructive criticism!!
It's an organic/boho styles jewelry line<3
Thank you!! :))
Xoxo,
Dez

[Trinkuneli]

Hello creative people :)
I am a new on Etsy platform. I opened my shop a few months ago. now I am concentrated in increasing listings and improvement SEO.
I sell printed fine art photos and instant download art. Maybe someone can give advices on how to improve the availability of the shop, how to receive the first buyer and some the criticism are welcome.
Thanks for all in advance,
Martyna