i agree with Karen about the SEO tags
also, your photo's could use improving. Let's take this one
https://www.etsy.com/listing/166888839/white-beaded-hoop-earrings-shabby-chic?ref=listing-0The earrings itself are what you're selling, and yet, the background is the one that's in focus.
I totally understand about it being hard to live your life - I have two small children - one of which is only 4 months!
I try to improve one thing in my listing - not every day or every week, but just aim for one thing. once you do that, I move on to the next thing.
For example, over the years, I've improved my pictures waaaaaay more as well as my tags, but they didn't happen over night. The better your pictures and your tags, the more your views and possibly a sale. Just remember that it's hard to get people to purchase over the internet - they can't see, touch or feel the item before they buy, so you need good listings and more importantly, great photos to draw them in.