Keep patient! Your shop looks beautiful and your determination will persevere. If I could make one suggestion is that I never see a picture of your item in full view and some of the pictures (while beautiful) are hard to comprehend.
Take for instance:
http://www.etsy.com/listing/79965682/wire-wrapped-necklace-gemstones-crystalsPicture one and two are beautiful, but three, four, and five do a better job of selling the necklace.
Also there is that disclaimer -
Please note that as this item is re-listed when sold, you won't receive the exact same necklace pictured here.
Which, thank you for the disclaimer, but is it that much more work to take pictures and have the item shown as is. It could be a turn off to potential viewers.
Otherwise, tags, titles, everything seems very good.
I wish you the best :) Also - do not underestimate the power of people you know. I have 73 sales (I've been opened since June of this year). At first my friend's started buying, slowly and sure I would say they've made up maybe 20 of my sales. That's great. I also put my business card everywhere. Restaurants, art shows, community center boards - last night to the nice lady at local art store. Good luck - keep working at it, your sales will push through :)