Hi Barbie!
Okay, here is my advice:
1. "Purse", "clutch", or "bag" (or whatever best describes the item) should be within the first 2-3 words of every listing. Let's take this listing, for example:
http://www.etsy.com/listing/84369108/vintage-beaded-and-sequin-small-clutchThe current title is: "Vintage Beaded and Sequin Small Clutch Bridal Purse Hong Kong by Tote All Vintage"
I'd change it to something like this: "Bridal Clutch Purse Vintage Beaded Sequin Hong Kong", "Vintage Purse Bridal Clutch Beaded Sequin Hong Kong", or "Clutch Purse Vintage Bridal Beaded Sequin Hong Kong"... you get the idea. "Purse" or "Clutch" should be within the first two words, and - in my opinion - "Vintage" and "Bridal" should also be close to the beginning of the title. This is important for SEO and relevancy. In order to choose the precise wording, you might want to try typing keywords into the search bar in order to see what autocomplete options are offered (these will be popular search phrases).
2. Tags. I'd tweak 'em a bit... for example, I'd find a way to fit "bridal clutch" and "bridal purse" in. I'd remove "for sale"... everything on Etsy is for sale. I don't think many people will search for that phrase here, and it's probably not worth including it for Google searches, either... especially since Google only takes the first few tags.
3. Photographs. I can see that you're trying to take your photographs in natural light, which is great, but your photographs are still a bit too dark (IMHO). I once read a great tip: Include something white in your photographs so that you can use it to adjust the colour balance/brightness in a photo editing program. I decided to go with a white background, but a little piece of white paper at the edge of the photo (so you can crop it out at the end) would work just as well. For example, look at how this bright photo grabs your attention:
http://www.etsy.com/listing/79220613/vintage-70s-ivory-and-tan-floralI'd also leave your shop name off the photographs, since having it there will probably make them less likely to get to the FP.
4. Shop sections. You may want to consider arranging your shop differently so you can fit more SEO phrases into your section titles. For example, you could arrange your items by type/occasion ("formal clutches", "bridal purses", "leather purses", "vegan purses", etc.). People can always search your shop for items in a specific colour by using the search bar at the top of the page.
That's pretty much it! Your shop is wonderful; you have a great selection, and your item descriptions are really good. Of course, all of this advice is just my non-expert opinion, but I hope I've said at least one helpful thing. :)
I hope you enjoy great success here; good luck!
