Small Businesses like me need more advice

[LoomletCreations]

Can somebody please go to my shop, LoomletsCreation then go to contact me and give me some advice

[NanaLetha]

https://community.etsy.com/t5/Technical-Issues/Give-me-some-feedback/m-p/145974929

[TheVintagePineapple]

Most sellers here would not feel comfortable contacting you directly.  

You posted under Technical Issues, when the section you can ask for help is called Shop Critiques.  You'll get more help and advice from a variety of sellers when you post here:

Shop Critiques - Welcome to the Etsy Community

[AnchorRoadVintage · Accepted solution]

You should definitely ask for a shop critique. 

[LoomletCreations]

Can you critique my Shop???

[NanaLetha]

@LoomletCreations  Many people already gave you a shop critique. Click the link I posted above.

[PlatypusDream]

The Etsy Seller's Handbook is FULL of advice for new shops.

You should spend time reading it BEFORE asking for a critique.

https://www.etsy.com/seller-handbook/article/838957668224

I gave you advice on Sunday.

You are STILL using the nonsense word "LOOMLET" in all of your listing titles. NO ONE will search with that word.

USE BRACELET instead.

People are very reluctant to help people who don't take the advice offered.

[GlassyFields]

I took a look at your shop.

Your photos are dark and busy.  It's hard to see what you're selling. 

Your about section has more about Etsy than yourself.

Read the Seller's handbook and look at shops that sell items similar to yours.

Your prices are really low ... make sure you understand what it costs to make your items including what you'll pay in fees.

Etsy is a lot of work. Creating items isn't enough.

[PotteryUrns]

As a small business owner it is up to us to use the resources available in the seller handbook, etc. and work on doing what we can for our shops. We can't always depend on someone else just because we are a small business. Big business have their struggles also. I don't intend to sound mean or anything, but so many come to Etsy expecting it to be easy money and it is far from it. It takes a lot of work on our part and a lot of time and patience to get a shop going. I've been here over 10 years and still struggle at times. I started back when there wasn't near the competition that there is not just here on Etsy, but the internet as a whole and I only got 1 sale my first four months. Maybe a dozen my first year, but I kept trying different things and plugging along. Welcome to Etsy and good luck with your shop.