Mixing languages in your shop confuses customers and the search engine.
Write your whole shop in one language or the other. Etsy recommends you use your native language and let the automatic program translate it for you.
I can't read your About section because it's in Spanish. But your Announcement is in English??
https://help.etsy.com/hc/en-us/articles/360000343048-How-to-Translate-Your-Shop-and-Listings?segment...
The Tagline (underneath your shop name) needs to contain searchable keyword phrases that describe what you sell because is crawled by search engines to determine what you sell.
Your Announcement has spelling mistakes. "desings"
Using fancy emojis is considered spammy, poor quality content. They don't meet editorial and professional standards, so your shop may be downgraded or eliminated from search results (on Google). Spelling, grammar, capitalization and proper sentence structure is also important for this reason.
Your titles won't help you get found. Example:
"Christmas Gift Paper".
I have no idea what colour it is, what style it is, how much I'll get. Titles need to be SPECIFICALLY about the exact item for sale. Don't just use broad, general phrases.
Lengthen that title and add more literally descriptive keyword phrases.
Example:
"White Christmas Wrapping Paper with Red Poinsettias and Toys, Festive Be Merry Gift Wrap for Holiday Giving"
The description also needs to literally describe what you are selling. Don't just lazily copy / paste from the print on demand company. When you do that your listing is identical to millions of others across the internet, meaning it is poor quality, spammy, repetitive content that won't rank well. Descriptions are crawled by search engines to determine what you sell. Don't waste that space with spam content.
