@Rachel S. say in convo to me:
And maybe u can help me, I have been trying to work on my descriptions forever, can you tell me what is hard to understand? I have to keep most of the info because it helps explain things, what I need from my customers, but maybe a simpler bullet point system?
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I will not go through all your listing descriptions, I wish someone will do this for me ;))) We are asking here for critique only, so I will try to show you on this exemple:
For what kind of help are you asking here??? For me everything you posted here doesn't make any sense. Maybe I cannot understand, because of my English? It is not my native language...
OK. I'll try to write down below what, I think, you wanted to say:
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> I sell mostly bracelets for couples. I sell them as a "pack" of 2.
> QUESTION IS : how do you think I can organize process to sale bracelets not in the "pack" of 2, but separately in order to give my customers more flexibility to chose colors, variations, length etc.
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Is this what you meant ?
I will leave you Feedback on this post, but let me know if I got it right.