OMG your slippers are so cute! I found myself wondering if you include any padding or support on the bottom, or are they similar to a sock, where its just the knitting. ALso this line left me feeling weird:
<3 These slippers will be made in a 100% smoke free environment :)
I would suggest changing it to "all my items are made in a smoke free environment" or something similar.
Im not sure if you smoke or not but the line you wrote left me wondering, does she smoke in her home but wil be making these in a seperate room? Just weird wording.
ALso a BIG NO NO is adding "free" to your title, I have heard google looks down on that, also it hurts your SEO. I would suggest taking it out of all your listings, customers aren't looking for items with free gifts, why not just surprise your customers with that? They will get a special little extra and It will make them keep you in mind next time they need slippers :)
http://www.etsy.com/listing/119725330/seaspray-hat-crocheted-hat-baby-toddlerfor this item i like the second picture better, I would also suggest with all your pics to open them in your photo editor and brighten them just a tad, they are very good pics just needs a little more light.
http://www.etsy.com/listing/120108825/free-gift-included-womens-crochetthese slippers are not in the "slipper" section of your shop
Your shop title you need to take out your name(it is automatically included after your description) and put Handmade Crochet Slippers and Hats, or something similar.
Hope I was able to help :)
Rachel
