Crituque please!

[JariSalminen]

Hi All!

Please visit my shop, tell me whats wrong or what I can improve.

I will gladly return the favor!

Have a great weekend

Jari

[SellerTips · Accepted solution]

Welcome to the group, here are a few of my observations on your shop:  

Your descriptions and titles are looking decent but I think your tags could use some improvement.

You're using a lot of one-word tags with high competition, and not too many long tails. Some more specific keyword choices could help you rank better in search results and get more relevant traffic. 

I think you've also mispelled "design" in several of your tags as "desing"

[JariSalminen]

Thank you for your succestions!

Jari

[KnottedbyV · Accepted solution]

Hi!  I love your signs!  You have soo many it’s awsome.   The only critique I have is lighting on some of your photos is a little dark, and a few look a little busy.  The signs themselves are great and I love the about section. All your policies look in order as well!   

Vetonica

[JariSalminen]

Thank you! I do not understand what the "signs" are???

I am aware about the lack of light in some pictures, I live in Finland, hardly any daylight here in winter : ) Spring is coming with better natural light.

Best regards

Jari

[AtelierniShasha]

Hi there!

One thing I'd like for you to try is make your background for your products consistent.

Your products are colorful, so I suggest a muted or neutral background --- but this is only for your first photo or thumbnail.

You can go ahead then with real settings, or lifestyle photos of them in real rooms backgrounds for the succeeding photos. These are important as they suggest how the potential buyer can imagine your products in their homes.

But for the thumbnail photo/primary/cover photo, use a uniform background accross all or similar products.

In one view of your shop page, the buyer will have a peace of mind with the neutral, same background, and with this, your product will shine, the background will not compete.

This advice is something I got from a shop critique request I made 3 months after opening my Etsy shop and getting only 3 sales. I applied neutral or non-competing backgrounds to my cover photos, and my products took stage ;)

Good luck to you! Your vases are fabulous <3

hugs,

shasha from the Philippines