I think they're alright. Even though, your photos are already good (well-lit and taken). Consider improving them even more and not lowering your price. Also if you think it's necessary to put your logo on all your pictures? In my opinion, they're a little distracting. Maybe a watermark or your shop's url would be better. Also, be firm with your price because I think you're on the right track.
You also made 2 sales already in the month you've been on Etsy. Good job! I had 1 sale in 2 months and some people here haven't had a sale in a year! So, kudos to you for that.
I think you just need to get more exposure to get even more sales. Try blogging, facebook, twitter, pinterest, etc. Whatever you can do to get more people to view your items and get more sales.
You're doing a great job. Just work more towards improving photos any way you can since that's the only way the buyer can interact with your product. List more items or relist, relist, relist to get a greater chance of being found on searches. Market and advertise like crazy and you should see an increase in orders in weeks or months that you keep going at it.