Chantelle,
I think you need to work on your pictures. Some of them are quite good, but others are blurry, most are different sizes (which I think looks unprofessional), and there are so many different styles that it makes your shop look non cohesive to me. Your close are bold, so the bold backgrounds distract from your designs. I like the yellow picture you took in the item below. The others in this listing not so much as they are blurry. I like the bold color because its playful and fun, but still allows your item to be the center of attention.
https://www.etsy.com/listing/160860827/purple-rockabilly-bow-top-940s-1950s?ref=shop_home_active_17I also think your prices are weird. Some items seem way too low, others just right.
Overall I think your so close, and on the right track. Your shop is just disjointed and as an outsider I have a hard time understanding your point of view. I think if you can create a cohesive look and feel shoppers will have an easier time understanding who you are.
Good Luck!!