constructive criticim

[BeadsBanglesandBows]

Hello everyone! I am a pretty new seller here on etsy. What else could I do to make my shop sound more attractive to buyers? Could my item descriptions be longer? Thanks you all for your time.

[WilliamsGiftshop]

Ten tips from Etsy for new Etsy shops:
blog.etsy.com/en/2013/top-10-tips-for-starting-an-etsy-business/

And there's a world of advice in the Etsy seller handbook!
blog.etsy.com/en/2013/the-seller-handbook-archive/

[BeadsBanglesandBows]

Thank you for your response! I have taken a look at those links before, just looking for a review and someone's advice on what I could change to improve. :)

[SunnySideCouture]

Your shop looks good, in fact I favorite you yesterday because you make nice thing. Pictures look good to. You could try to look at your SEO's, it think you could improve them so you get found in search more easily.
Also it helpes to use other medium platform like facebook or a blog.

I am pretty new at etsy as well, but found I have more views since I spent time looking to improve my SEO's. Since yesterday I started advertising on facebook, and since I have quite a lot of facebook likes, that works as well. My views are good the last week and I even made my first sale.

[Former_Member]

Photos - Most of them seem nice and show what the item was clearly. Some of them were kind of blurry.
Also try using all five spaces for your photos. Customers are online shopping. They need full detail! Try all different angles and directions.
Tags - One word tags are not favoured in search. Use two and three word phrases to describe your items. Individual words should not be repeated more than twice. Titles and tags should echo each other. The exact phrases used in your title should also be used in your tags. Think like a buyer!
Descriptions - The descriptions could be a little longer on some of them. Like a little more describing the item.
Very nice items. Good luck and happy selling.

[Former_Member]

Nice shop.
Beautiful jewelry.

Everyone has given you wonderful advice.
Lots of luck to you.

[Former_Member]

I really like your banner and think your work is beautiful. You have a picture of a light colored necklace against a lace shirt and I think the necklace gets lost against the shirt.
Good luck!