Your preference?

[EchidnaArtandCards]

Which listing's description is easier to read and more appealing to you? I have used bullets in one and not the other.

Is there too much to read?

Other suggestions for making description more customer friendly?

Thanks in advance!

https://www.etsy.com/au/listing/171554924/food-photography-kitchen-art-fine-art

https://www.etsy.com/au/listing/112819597/feather-photography-abstract-patterns-in?ref=related-1

[Former_Member]

I prefer the artichoke one.

[Former_Member]

Both are great though - awesome photographs!

[EchidnaArtandCards]

Thanks, Amanda.

Anyone else?

[Former_Member]

I prefer the artichoke one too. You have some really great photos and I really like that you have described what inspired you to take the picture i.e. strolling through a market. It gives the picture a little story

[woolpleasure]

Anita

I like both

Just small suggestion- add USA to *ship to*

Happy sales!

[EchidnaArtandCards]

Interesting suggestion that I never thought of, but I can see how it can help.

Thanks!

[JewelMeShop]

I vote for artichoke too. It's more customer friendly

[EchidnaArtandCards]

Any other suggestions? I am starting to change the other listings.

[Former_Member]

I love both pictures and think both descriptions are good. The artichoke one is definitely the one most likely to get views though. I doubt many people type in "Abstract Patterns in Nature," but "Kitchen Decor" and "Food Photography" are sure to be common searches. Maybe if you put "White Peacock" before the "Abstract Patterns..." words?

[Mzcarley]

I like the artichoke