Christina Cassidy from tinaswaycrochet says
I wouldn't be mad at cha if anyone wants to help me with my shop.
I need all the help I can get.
Tina...;)
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I'll give it a shot. I'll randomly pull one of your listings (which, btw, are absolutely gorgeous).
http://www.etsy.com/listing/96127776/aqua-annies-crochet-barefoot-sandals-inSo I have no idea what Aqua Annie's is or what it means. I don't know any of the common crochet terms so I couldn't even tell someone if Aqua Annie's was the name of a yarn company, a design pattern, or if it's just something that you created yourself. (If it is something you created yourself, then girl you can market the heck out of that).
For this listing, there's nothing necessarily 'wrong' with the title, other than aesthetics. I would change it to Yellow Barefoot Sandals - Aqua Annie's Collection. This establishes "Yellow Barefoot Sandals" as your main keyword/phrase, is 50 characters long, and establishes the phrase "Aqua Annie's" as a collective phrase for other Aqua Annie's listings. (The current title is 47 characters.)
Your description is too short and has way too many personal opinions that just won't hold any weight with a potential consumer.
"You are gonna love these barefoot sandals."
Why? What makes you so sure that I'm going to love them if you're not telling me anything about them? I would try to steer clear of using phrases like this.
Instead, tell me something about these sandals and how they're different from all the other barefoot sandals that are available. Here's where the Aqua Annie's collection comes in. Explain what Aqua Annie's is, especially if it's your own design.
"These Yellow Barefoot Sandals (see how you're reiterating your main keyword/phrase here?) are one of my Aqua Annie's Designs (this is called branding). I crafted these using [insert material here]. They are [insert description like soft or sturdy or comfortable here] and [insert what they do here like "decorate your pretty feet"].
You want to break up your description after two or three sentences. Consumers don't like walls of text.
[Here, tell me how you came up with the design for Aqua Annie's.] And, finally, here is where you want to tell me the general size but avoid saying one size fits ALL. There's bound to be someone out there with some really huge feet and they won't fit which will make this person very, very sad. T___T Rather, say 'one size fits most.'"
If you have these available in different colors, you should probably list them separately if you're going to use a certain color in your title. This does at least three positive things for you. One, it avoids unnecessary confusion. Believe it or not, consumers are very easily confused. Thus, why there are so many laws in place to protect them. Two, it frees up some valuable picture space for your gorgeous Yellow Barefoot Sandals - Aqua Annie's Collection. Third, it increases your listing count which means you've increased your chances of being found. (What if someone's looking for a pair of Red Barefoot Sandals?!)
Also, if Aqua Annie's is your own design and you intend to use this as a branding element, then I suggest that you group all of your Barefoot Sandals in their own section titled "Aqua Annie's Collection".
Include a link in the body of your description to a relevant section of your shop and tell the potential customer why.
"Not what you're looking for? View more of my Aqua Annie's Collection here:
[insert shop link]"
This keeps the customer looking around in your shop. Even if he/she doesn't buy the Yellow Barefoot Sandals, he/she may purchase a different pair of sandals.
Apologies for another long rant. >__<