As a draft it looks ok! However, you do need photos on the front page, otherwise I'd have no idea what you were selling me.
I like websites to be white and simple, but thats just personal taste, I personally feel that they look more professional and the images usually look clearer.
From your store name I'd have expected to see pinks and reds and like 1337art said, the colour needs to be changed! The grey font would look fab on white as well.
Take a look at my site and let me know what you think;
www.cherryblossomjewellery.com
Beth, Cherry Blossom Jewellery x