I would offer printing the items for your customers as well and mailing- people like me that don't have a printer would go to the next shop that offers a tangible piece, even if I have to pay for shipping.
Also, I feel if you make your wording bigger in those blurbs and center them a little differently you could get more interest. An example is what makes you feel like a kid in a candy store? I think could definitely be bigger in regards to font.
Hope this helps!
Kelly