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Shop Critique

Hi there!

I opened my shop in September (or something like that) but I wouldn't consider that the start of my shop I didn't really do much then. So the real "start date" would be sometime around February. Since then, I've had like 19 sales, but lately I haven't been getting any sales and I'm wondering if any of you experienced sellers can tell me what kind of things I can do to my shop to improve the look or whatever else!

-Zainab
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TinTeddy
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Re: Shop Critique

I am not an experienced seller - but I am a very experienced buyer, lol

So I hope I have a couple of suggestions that may be of help.

1 - Your pictures are very small, The actual item is only taking a small percent of the frame, could you zoom in or crop tighter, perhaps? Might make your items pop out and say 'buy me' more?

2- Your section names have spaces between the letters. Google does look at section names, but won't be able to read them like this, so maybe worth putting them in to conventional text?

3 - You have no shop polcies! In common with quite a few people I find this very offputting, sorry. Without policies it is hard to believe a shop is going to take things seriously and professionally.

4 - Having almost identical descriptions for many things can be detrimental for search engines. I realise it is hard when your things are so similar to each other, but if you could introduce a few variations to the various listings this might well help your SEO - and to be honest I think it is nice for browsers in your shop to have different things to read :-)

5 - Your pins are really pretty and look very neatly made. I wish you the very best of luck with your new shop :-)
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Former_Member
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Re: Shop Critique

Thank you so much for the critique =).

1. Working on cropping those pictures.
2. Fixed the shop sections.
3. Added shop policies.
4. Not sure how to vary the descriptions for the pins... They are the same exact thing, except for the color. Any suggestions?
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TinTeddy
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Re: Shop Critique

You could say the same thing in different ways:

A dusty pink flower to grace a hijab....

Looking for something for your hijab? How about this soft blue flower...

A flower in softest lemon, pefect for your hijab and so much more!

This little flower, lovingly crocheted in a pretty shade of cream...

For those special occaissions when you want to add that extra little touch...



I will stop now, getting carried away, hehe
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