Shop Bootcamp: Critics welcome!

[Former_Member]

I'm still kind of new to Etsy, my shop has been open for about a year, but I haven't many sales until recently. It is exciting and so encouraging! I would like to boost my sales, though!
Feel free to look & judge my shop and tell me what to improve on! (pictures, tags, titles, etc)

Thanks!
xoxo

[PiecesOfMePaperCraft]

I didn't check out your tags or anything like that because I was too busy admiring all the cute stuff in your shop.

I just favorited your shop and one of your rings. :)

[Former_Member]

Aww thank you so much! :)

[Former_Member]

gee wiz, you've got some pretty adorable things too! In love! :)

[TOMgirlApparel]

Hi Katie!

For tags, you don't need to repeat your category tags (you have ring twice), that gives you another available tag! You shouldd repeat the tags that you have in your title. So if your title is "Bright Pink Floral Adjustable Ring Flower Floral Ring Vintage Inspired Big Cocktail Ring" then you should have the tags: adjustable ring, flower floral ring, vintage inspired, cocktail ring" etc.

Your pics are good, change your shop title to exactly what you sell. Change your shop announcement so that it doesn't start with "welcome". These are search engine prime real estate and no one searches for "welcome".

You need to work on your policies. They are a bit bare and don't send an upbeat tone.

You have really cute stuff, good luck!