Sections critiques please

[Former_Member]

Hello I see critiques in the tags so I hope its ok to ask for one here.
I made over my sections and I think I did it in a fun creative way. Would anyone care to take a peek and give your opinion? I also re did my banner posting some of what I sell so right away customers will be able what I have to offer.

Thanks so much

[Former_Member]

I LOVE your magnets. I honestly thought you sold food for a bit until I read further. I was asking my husband how someone could ship a turkey LOL.

As for sections they are creative but I was always told to make them more like you do tags.

[Former_Member]

Thanks LaDonna!

[Former_Member]

I agree with LaDonna. I've read that section names are utilized in searches and it helps to make them simple and relevant to the item -but I don't know if that is still how Etsy does it. It is definitely a cute idea though!

[Former_Member]

So cute! But if they match your tags and key words in your descriptions, they'll more likely be found in search. :0)

[InsideSandysShop]

I have to agree that your section titles are so CUTE but they should agree with tags and titles for search purposes.
If I had these I would eat them - they look so yummy ;-)
https://www.etsy.com/listing/114703243/candy-bar-magnet-1-piece-2-14?ref=shop_home_feat
I love your banner - you are very creative!
Blessings,
Sandy

[Former_Member]

ty :)

[WhereIdeasCome2Life]

lol ... some of your items look eatable.