Profile Critique

[Former_Member]

Hey everyone! I just rewrote a bit of my profile and was wondering if anyone would mind taking a quick peek? I don't want it to be very long, but I tried to give a little snapshot of who I am and why I do what I do.

[HausofAriella]

I like it! It's fun and makes me want to take a bath ;) I think the second paragraph should come first though, since it really explains your shop.

[Former_Member]

Thanks, Ariella! I flipped it around and I like it better this way too.

And maybe you should take a bath. :)

[magiccircleclothing]

I'm in the process of reworking my profile right now! I think yours looks really good! I never know what to say about since my life is so un-glamorous lol Congratulations on your baby!! :D

[Former_Member]

Thank you! We're super excited!