Beth, you've got some lovely arrangements there - you'll need to fiddle and adjust and add more listings, but I'm sure you'll reach customers! A few thoughts I had that might help...
Your shop announcement (the text directly under your shop name) currently says "Crafting a BEAUTIFUL way of life". Which is a nice sentiment - but does you no good whatever. That area (the page's"real estate") is one that Google searches - and it should always have relevant keywords. Use a few words, phrases, sentences, to say what you do, what you sell, and why customers need to click through! "Custom made brooch bouquets" or "custom hair accessories" or "vintage brooch bouquet" or whatever is appropriate. I offer a discount coupon in mine :-)
The same sort of comments apply to your listing titles and tags. "This is your life bouquet" - you probably want your the first words of your title to be words people actually search for. I don't know a lot about bouquets, so I'd probably search through Etsy - and the web - to see what sorts of phrases people do use, that apply to your items. (And I was hurrying, so you might have super tags and I just rushed through too much!)
Also, like all of us, your pics could use some work. Don't get me wrong - you have some good pics! I'm just thinking for example, that a little more simplicity, a whiter background, etc., might show off your work better. Believe me, I'm always trying to get better pics, I know it's a constant challenge..
You've got a great beginning - best of luck to you!
