Just give me ONE reason! :)

[#1]

I love these interactive, help critique eachother games. I have had invaluable feedback and have appreciated it so much! I have also noticed that I shy away from critiquing a shop because,being a busy mom, it sometimes takes toomuch time to do an adequate and thorough critique.....
With that said, I propose we try this:

Let's act as if we are random shoppers who, like so many do, arejust stopping by to shop.

What is ONE thing that would compel you to shop at my shop?

and

What is ONE thing that would turn you away?

We can really give eachother some great tips and feedback without having to invest too much time.

I will start! Who would like me to visit thier shop????

[SesenDesign]

Baloolahbunting- Hi Claire and welcome to Etsy.
Love the name and your banner shouts out fun and simplicity.

Bunting isn't a 'big thing' in Australia and we don't see it around much, so I wouldn't be able to discuss cost and value. But the banners do look attractive and you have a good variety to suit different occasions.

What I would like to see in some of your pics would be them displayed either at a venue or playfully on a tree/ladders against the sky in daylight maybe.
The pics could do with a little bit of extra lighting, just play around with your photo editor to give the images a bit of a kick.

Good luck with your shop.

[Former_Member]

Julie @ Sensearts

Your shop is beautiful and I like your pictures! I think a few great model shots with a young, contemporary girl would be great!

[judithbelloriginals]

@Missy Perez

I want to thank you for your honest assessment of my shop, and for the nice compliments. I really had no idea the "why" of my paintings would be of interest to anyone...I am taking your advice to elaborate a bit on my profile:)

Judy

[BaloolahB]

Thanks Julie! As soon as the sun comes out I will be out taking photos in a lovely sunny setting!! Snowing right now!! Thanks for your comments!!!
Claire

[Former_Member]

ShabbyScrap

I hope this is not confusing: I love the photos of your items but I also think that sometimes it's hard to tell what they depict. I had to click on a listing and read the title to figure it out....hey, that's a good thing. You made me click on your item, very clever.

[SesenDesign]

ShabbyScrap - Marlene, thank you for your comments. I would love to have models, but they aren't too easy to come by here. But I know I need to give my pics more of a kick, just trying to work out how.

[Former_Member]

alpine bake shop

yummy town! The one thing that would get me to shop in your store is the delicious goodies you make. The one thing that turns me off are your photos. They would pop even more if they were brighter, as in more white in the photo. Also, your gift certificates are distracting. Perhaps put them all in the same row instead of having them peppered about. They command more visual focus then the photos of your baked goods.