Item descriptions

[OhKuol]

What's more readable? Long descriptions with materials and measurements separated, or when all details are meshed into one/two sentences?

i.e

http://www.etsy.com/listing/73475599/labradorite-chain-maille-necklace?ref=v1_other_1
versus
http://www.etsy.com/listing/73600291/sky-blue-topaz-silver-crystal-necklace?ref=pr_shop

Thanks
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[Former_Member]

You need to look into google analytics, there is so much that you can learn, and I am still learning!!!

[OhKuol]

Thanks for the reply AndiaCreations, I have an analytics account, I basically use it to track where all my traffic is coming from... and then I use craftopolis.com to see which keywords of mine are working... how are you using analytics?