I guess i need help

[Former_Member]

Hi all,
We opened a shop on May and trying to make everything useful to advance.
Could you please look our profile and give some advices?

Thank you so much

(Sorry for amateur English :))

Tuğçe

[Former_Member]

I think your profile looks very good!
https://www.etsy.com/people/tgcdr
It tells me who you are and what you are all about.

[Former_Member]

Thank you so much

[Former_Member]

I, personally, don't really like the 'FREE SHIPPING' in the titles, as I have no idea what you're selling (of course I can take a look at the photo, and the photos are beautiful) - but, I would like to read a title that describes the item.

Other than that - looks good!

[weekendjewelry1]

Your shop looks good - I just wanted to mention that Free Shipping in the titles actually hurts you with Google, or so I've been told. Those words are a red flag to google SEO. That's probably not true for Etsy searches, but it's worth thinking about.

also a couple small things: I clicked on your "Rustic Wood Lamp, Table Lamp, Wooden Table Lamp". You give the dimensions for the lamp in cms - it would probably be helpful to also give the size in inches.

Also, your text says "- It is professionally backed with strafor in a special cardboard box packaging." I don't actually know what strafor is - maybe other people don't - so you might talk a bit more about your packaging and how the item will arrive safely. But most of all, talk more about your lamp! Tell me why I will love it.

Best of luck!

[LeedsRadio]

You don't have enough items and you have tags that are single words like "digital." Type that in a search and you'll get almost a million items.
You also have confusing text:

"Print of an original drawing in graph pen.This original artwork is made by Tuğçe Diri. Only 5 copies have been produced."

You mention "original" then copies.

When I first saw the item I thought that $25 was a very low price for an original pen drawing then saw copies and I was confused.

What does this mean?:
"Mat area is given in."