This is a beautiful start, angle and light on the ring, its really pretty but blurry, that however may not be contributing to low views, but not helping sales when you do get views:)
http://www.etsy.com/listing/86920558/ring-pinkyellow-crystal-wire-wrappedThe first line of this listing:
"Sitting on your porch, watching the sun set, ending another lazy summer day, completed with a glass of cool, fresh, pink lemonade~"
Its interesting and storytelling but wont get you found in google, maybe use desccriptive keywords first and then say how you were inspired by and put this quite,
Also I am not sure that / and - are good for search and seo, maybe try omitting them:0
Your items are pretty, I think also raise your prices a bit.
Raise your prices and lower your shipping. It shows you value your time:)
You will get the same amount but it will feel more even, a lot of jewlery sellers with small pieces even do free shipping, i dont do free shipping, but if you were charge $15 and free shipping it may help:)