Very nice work on the crochet beads! A few suggestions:
You've misspelled "earrings" in the section name and in a few tags I looked at (2 Rs). You'll miss out on a lot of searches til this is fixed. Also, colorful has only 1 L at the end.
Your titles for several of the same item (e.g. pacifier clips) are the same. For a wider range of hits in searches, mix up the titles a bit. Rearrange the order of the descriptive phrases (the 1st three words are most important in relevancy, I think). Include the main colors, the animals, the option to personalize/customize.
Speaking of pacifier clips, you describe them as crocheted, but wouldn't "beaded" be more accurate?
Your banner is difficult to read. You could omit the etsy address, since if a person is viewing your banner in your shop, they're already at the address. This will give you more space to enlarge your shop name. (I do like the photo)
I sense that English isn't your first language. I can't imagine having to do my own listings in a second language, and you've done a good job....but if you could get a friend to go over your descriptions and help you correct some grammar and spelling, it would help in search relevancy and ease of reading for shoppers.
Whew! Good luck, you're off to a great start!
