Andie,
I found that your banner does need to have more life to it, maybe brighten with
color, or several colors. The pictures do have a grey overtone, did you
edit the originals, you should be able to go back & edit your pictures.
I know I have worked on mine several times.
I agree with Lisa that the shop description does need more information.
At first glance I wasn't sure what you were selling. Do remember this
is really a process for most of us. We set up thinking the views & sales
will just be there. I have also found they are not. Continue to work on your
shop & try to post more items.
I've been discouraged myself, but refuse to give up. Maybe time will bring
success. Sorry this became so long. You can contact me if you would
like to talk. Best wishes to you!