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I thought this would be a fun thread, as lots of us are looking for some critiques/advice. Rate the banner from the shop above on a scale of 1 to 10 and tell why. :)

Re: Critique the banner above!

Belinda! I love your banner :) . It's clean, legible, and fits the style of your shop. I wouldn't change a thing.

I noticed under your shop name that you have the message, "'New Day Embroidery' wants to help you find that Special Item. We personalize also."

I know you probably ran out of room, but "We personalize also" sounds a bit odd. Maybe you can shorten it to say, "New Day Embroidery wants to help you find that special, personalized gift."

Just a suggestion :)
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Re: Critique the banner above!

Sarah,
your banner goes nicely with your shop, but I am not sure what the blue creature is.
It seems to be one of your original paintings? If so, you might put a painting with that creature on your first page near the top. Then we can put 2 and 2 together a little easier!
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