Critique on "About" section

Everyone's is different and that's what I love, people giving a history of how they got here or how they do things.

What do you think? Thumbs up? Too long? Boring? Criticisms? Approvals?

I'd appreciate it :)

www.etsy.com/shop/WithLoveFromLucille/about
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