I love your items, they are beautiful, but you need to edit your photo's so they are brighter, a grey/white or cream background would set your jewellery off really well. The more items you have in your shop means customers will find you more easily. Renew at least 1 item per day. Esty states a law on returns for all customers, this information is in the Etsy handbook.
Join as many Esty teams as you can and do them daily.
You can heart 300 items in 1 hour period. You can follow as many as 1,080 shops at any given time.
Here is a link to my shop, which you may love or hate the look of, but this will give you some idea of how you want your shop to look.
https://www.etsy.com/ie/shop/4SeasonCards?page=3My front page at the moment is a bit of a mess, which is why the link is for page 3.
I wish you every success and many sales in the near future.
Kim :)