About Section

[AstridWeigel]

Hi! Just got round to doing my 'About" section in my shop and would really welcome some feedback!

[PrettyPictureGiftsCo]

I like it!
- Good images or your work area and product is consistent with the flower theme
- you are darn cute :O)
- your info is short and friendly

[Former_Member]

Looks great! I agree about your cuteness too.

Mine is lame. . .

[AstridWeigel]

Thank you guys!

[Former_Member]

I think it looks great and very professional. Nice work!

[Former_Member]

Your photos are so great! And great writing, it's so hard figuring out what to put there! My only suggestion would be to consider lines between the paragraphs so it's a little more aesthetically pleasing.

[TheSSSeamstress]

I agree -- great photos and writing! If I was on the fence about buying anything from you, I think your about section would push me in the right direction :)

[Former_Member]

I also just got around to doing my About page. Would you be so kind to let me know what you think.

https://www.etsy.com/your/shops/ArtForComfort/about

[yarncoture]

I love it! Your photos are crisp and give the right "hint" of your workspace without showing the entire picture. Your description is brief yet very informative. Wonderfully done!

[Former_Member]

It looks great Astrid!! How fun to create pattern on cloth like you do!
Love the doll dress. My mom was was a seamstress too. Fond memories of he sewing swirl around my head.

[Former_Member]

Margaret, I clicked on the link you provided and it came up as not available, so clicked on your shop.
Beautiful paintings!!! So glad you survived your bout and found a creative side! How exciting to find your hidden talent!
You might want to add a bit more in the description part. I found that was the tricky part when I did my about. Talking about me and what I do.

[AstridWeigel]

Just read your About section - lit's short but says it all I think and I love your hydrangea close up. I too found it quite hard to write so thanks for all your kind words everyone!