Need yours points of views, Thanks !

[Escale81]

Hello,
I opened my Etsy shop three months ago, and I worked a lot to improve my seo according to the advice that I could read.
I still have to work to improve my photos ...
But at this stage, I would really need to have yours criticisms and yours differents points of views.
Be free to tell me what you think,
Thank you very much to all,
I would be very happy to help you in return if I can !
https://www.etsy.com/fr/shop/Escale81?ref=seller-platform-mcnav

[FortuneIsland]

I am struggling with SEO myself. Your shop looks nice.

I would put a banner image on top inviting your customers and to recognize the shop with / branding.

You are in France, make it clear you ship internationally?
Put more text in announcement.

[thehobotrain]

Hey Mirey! Great to hear that you're working hard on your shop. Every little step counts. How are you currently finding and selection your keyword phrases? I can tell from a quick look at your shop that you're using a lot of phrases that are not popular with shoppers. This is preventing shoppers from finding your items in search results. You need to find the phrases that are popular with shoppers.

If you're on Facebook, I invite you to join our SEO expert's Facebook group where you will learn a lot about SEO for your Etsy shop: https://www.facebook.com/groups/SEOSalonGroup/

Best of luck! ♥

[Escale81]

Thank you LordAhab for your comments and the good idea to specify in my shop announcement that I ship internationally !

Renée thanks for your support !

Actually to find my keywords and pharses I first switch my Esty page language from french to english (as I have a french shop).
Then I try diffrent words/phrases in the research barre.
Then I choose the more approprieted words/phrases for my item that are display in first.

Could you please tell me some of the phrases I use wich are not popular with shoppers ?

And if it's not too long/complicated for you what should I do to improve the keywords I use ?

Sorry I'm not on Facebook
Thanks again for your precious support !

[thehobotrain]

Hi Mirey! You're most welcome! It is a pleasure to help. ♥

In this listing for example: https://www.etsy.com/ca/listing/583968158/deer-antler-jewelry-leather-bracelet?ref=shop_home_feat_4

Your title is "Deer Antler Jewelry, Leather Bracelet with Real Deer Antler and Handcrafted Blue Glass Beads, Multi Row Bracelet for a Unique Gift for Women". The only phrases that I would recommend using from this title are 'deer antler jewelry' and 'leather bracelet'. The rest of your title space is filled with phrases that either aren't used by shoppers '(multi row bracelet' and 'with real deer antler and handcrafted blue glass beads') or that are too generic (example: unique gift).

You need to find the phrases that shoppers are using when searching for an item like yours. If you don't use the exact phrases that shoppers are using then you are actually making it very hard for shoppers to find your items in search.

Best of luck!

Renée ♥

[Escale81]

Thanks Renée !

I thought that only the first part of the title have a real impact on SEO... well I need to work on it, again !

The other point is that I read somewhere it's not good for SEO to use several time the same word in title, what do you think about that ?
If yes I really need to be inventive !

And what about using Etsy research barre to find keywords ?

Thanks again !

[thehobotrain]

Hi Mirey! Here are the answers to your questions:

1) The whole title space is important.
2) You can absolutely repeat the same word. Not repeating words is a very common myth.
3) Using the autopopulating search bar on Etsy is fine for the beginning stages of brainstorming.

Best of luck! ♥

[Escale81]

Renée Thanks for your clear answers !

[thehobotrain]

You are most welcome! ♥

[ClothChapel]

Maybe you can show your earings and chokers on model. (With a dreamcatcher on background ;) The tie-up sales could also attract more costumers.
p.s. : I really admire you beeing a seller without Facebook presence.

[Escale81]

Thanks Csilla Albert for your comments and your photos ideas with jewelry and dreamcatcher.

Nice day to you

PS: Yes we can survive without FB ! at least I try...

[thehobotrain]

Yes, great suggestion to have pics with a model, Csilla! ♥