Shop Critique - Post your shop for a critique & offer advice for others' shops

[#1]

I'm a fairly new shop on etsy and am constantly working to improve.
As our first community building thread I'd like to create a space for member to post a link to their shops and get advice as to how it can be improved.
You may ask specific questions or simply leave it open to any critique.

Things to look at may be :
Logo design, shop name, shop description, banner, order of items, pattern "photos" or descriptions, sections, etc.

If you post your shop, please be open to any critique and advise others offer even if you disagree with their opinion.

If you offer advice and critique, please keep it courteous and constructive.

Let's help each other make our shops the best they can be to best showcase our patterns!

[Former_Member]

Could someone critique mine? I've been open for more than a month but no sales yet and I'm getting quite discouraged.
https://www.etsy.com/shop/QuestJenStitches

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