I need Critiquing - help!

[DiriJewels]

Hey guys!

How's everyone doing? I'm Tanmay, I joined Etsy just three weeks ago. I wanted you guys to give some feedback on my store. It's for jewelry!

Open to your opinions, suggestions, and advices. And please feel free to purchase an item if you like it  

Thanks in advance,
- Tanmay

[GarZenBotanicalDesi]

Welcome to Etsy Tanmay and G-d Bless capitalism and the free market. My name is Daniya and I am the marketing and sales coordinated at Gar-Zen Botanical Designs located in South Florida, USA. I looked over your site-very nice, very professional. Your products are just great. The prices are very reasonable. You have a nice collection and variety to choose from.  I can only give you my thoughts and I think you are presenting your product well. I have been on Etsy since mid 2019. I make sure I am on any and all social media platforms and blog conversations talking about our products. And if I come across a similar product of mine I try to beat others prices. I feel you are on target. Congratulations.

[DiriJewels]

Thank you GarZenBotanicalDesi, this gives me a lot of motivation to go forward. I really appreciate it.