Hey ReNeau, I understand your feeling totally. I started out the same way when I first started.
Let's look at this one
http://www.etsy.com/listing/88853428/knit-scarf-yellow-neckwarmerYou wrote:
"Long Skinny Knit Scarf is made with a lovely yellow Yarn.
100% Cotton Yarn in Buttercup yellow.
Beautiful Knit Scarf that is long enough to wrap around your neck a couple of times or just loop like the picture.
Knit in an Old Shell Stitch for a very feminine look.
Yellow Neckwarmer is very soft, does not itch.
This Knit Scarf would look great with a jacket and skirt or used to dress up jeans and a t-shirt.
It measures 65" long and about 4" wide.
Will stretch longer, this measurement was taken with it just laying out flat on a table.
Not a real thick yarn so it would work great for spring also.
Hand wash and lay flat to dry.
(Machine washing and drying can cause damage to knitted items,
therefore I never suggest you do that.)
Made in a smoke free. "
I like the fact that you gave me enough information, But I want that first line I read to grab me in. So let's try "Flipping" somethings around.
I did a bit of that and some rework:
"This Beautiful Old Shell Stitch Knit Scarf, done in Buttercup yellow, would look great with a jacket and skirt or used to dress up jeans and a t-shirt.
Long enough at 65" to wrap around your neck a couple of times or just loop like the picture. Knit in an for a very feminine look. Skinny At 4" wide to fit in with todays style.
Made with 100% Cotton Yarn this lovely Yellow Neckwarmer is very soft, & does not itch. Best yet it can be worn practically year round.
For Care: Hand wash and lay flat to dry.
(Machine washing and drying can cause damage to knitted items,
therefore I never suggest you do that.)
*As with most yarns stretching will occur, measurements were taken with it just laying out flat on a table."
Made in a smoke free. "