CandysCorner:
Three places where you can make an improvement :-)
1. Your 'shop title' (sometimes referred to as shop description) is Welcome To The Loom Room.
You need to be thinking, are people looking for Loom Rooms going to be happy to find my shop? There's no point in drawing people in if they are looking for something else, they will just click out of your shop. Welcoming descriptions ARE nice...but if you want to optimize you need to do away with being sentimental and get down to the nitty gritty.
Go here:
http://www.google.com/sktool/#Chose the updated version, and start thinking of words you can fill your shop with. Some of your items are quite unusual, so you should be able to find a nice niche.
When using the tool, you'll need to look for words that are HIGH monthly searches and LOW competition. I would put aside about an hour for this!
2.
Change the word 'stuff in your shop sections. Noone, bar NOONE will be searching for 'stuff' in Google. Replace it with Toys, Knitted Gifts, Gifts etc. Fill those shop section titles with great words because Google uses them as METATAGS which describe what type of webpage yours is.IMPORTANT!
3. Search your shop name on Google with the word Etsy. Then have a good hard think about whether the first result would make you click if you were looking for a knitted gift. I think your description could be must more enticing. People don't want to waste a click they would rather scroll down if they think your result isn't going to be relevant.
:-)