Help with SEO, tags and titles please

[LongDogLeather]

Hi all
Our shop has been open since July 4 and is doing ok. I'm still trying to figure out how to optimize all the titles and tags though. When I put in the first batch of collars they all had the same title and tags and I just changed part of the description that told the details of that particular collar. Now I'm trying to add more detail to my titles as I add more items.
Can anyone look over my shop and give me any advice on getting more than 10-20 views daily.
thanks

[isabellaswhimsy]

Hi Maureen and Sean,
I just took a quick look at your great shop - excellent pics, high quality products!
I did a little Etsy search for "dog collar" and 250 pages came up, so there is a lot of competition I think. I scanned through the first 5 pages and didn't see any of your work, so maybe you could try a few titles using "Dog Collar" at the beginning of the title. I didn't look at any of your descriptions or tags, but if you are not using dog collar as a tag it could be helpful to.
Also I noticed one shop listings repeatedly in the first 5 pages of the search. I don't know if it is ethical to mention their name here or not, but you can find it and check out their shop: titles, tags, descriptions and see if you can get any ideas. I didn't think to check any other shops to see how many views some of their items have had, but you might do that also.
I'm still at the basic level of SEO, so I hope this is helpful in some small way.
Janie