In your shop announcement it says "New:Eyes" What does that mean? I would leave it out. Use the shop announcement to tell everyone what you sell in your shop, what should they expect to see in your shop? Your banner picture is good, but it would be nice to have your shop name in it. Here is a site that gives instructions on using Pixlr to personalize your banner:
http://www.everythingetsy.com/how-to-personalize-your-free-etsy-banner-step-one/Also, some of your pictures are a little dark. Try to use light backgrounds.
Last thing is to list only one or two things a day. Spread out your listings, but try to post every day.