These are all great pointers! And very true. But my biggest piece of advice.... give it time! Seriously - orders will come in once more people start seeing your shop. My crochet stuff is starting to sell in decent handfuls, and I've been here for 4 months. Do craft fairs, get business cards, post like crazy on teams, etc. :) Your shop is very nice! I think you should have no problem selling. Just be patient!