Updated Shop Critique Pretty Please :-)

[sarahbellumdesign]

Hello team :-) it has been awhile since I asked for feedback on my shop as a whole. I'd love to hear some fresh opinions as well as some updated opinions if you've critiqued my shop before. Anything is fair game, even nit picky things! Please and thank you :-)

Sarah

[Former_Member]

Your shop is looking pretty terrific to me! The only thing I noticed that may help out is shaking up some of your titles.

You have a lot of felt flower hair clips so you could change a few of their titles around to have other keywords of yours in front, like "baby hair clip", "girls hair clip" or "womens hair accessories" whenever it's applicable. That way you'll still have a strong hold on felt flower hair clips but also attract extra business that might not immeadiately think to look for felt.

You could also think about changing some of the titles to match this season. I mean, your flower hair clips are really springy so you could use "spring hair clip", "bridal hair accessory" or "Bridesmaid hair clip" .

Anyway, that's just a suggestion, I really think your shop looks good!

[sarahbellumdesign]

Thank you Katy :-) SEO and tags amaze me, there is so much to know!

[Former_Member]

I love your shop! But here are a few nitpicky details.

1. Rearrange your listings so that there's a variety on your front page.
2. The bee listings are kind of confusing. I wish the first image on the listing was just of what I'd receive if I hit "buy." I'd suggest selling sets of of 1, 4, 8, and 16, and listing those all separately. It's kind of overwhelming to have to pick out which pattern of honeycomb I'd want since they're all so similar.
3. I wish I could see pictures of your hair accessories in someone's hair.

You're definitely on the right track! Hope this helps some.

[sarahbellumdesign]

Hi Elisa! Thank you so much for your advice :-) I would love to hear more about the bee listings. I'm a bit confused about what you said because I do currently sell them in sets of 1,3,4, and 16 and the first pictures are of what you will receive. They show how the magnets look when together and also when separate. Clearly I haven't done a good job at presenting them though because it was confusing for you, do you have any tips on how I can clarify this?

I definitely see what you mean about having to pick out the patterns, I think I will scrap that option on the sets :-) thanks again!