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Please Critqiue - In Desparate Need....

Thank you!
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It looks like you just started listing your current items within the past 2 weeks? Continue to promote your shop on and off Etsy. Continue to work on your photos and titles should have words that buyers would search for, with the most important keywords first.
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Hi!
I will start with your banner- I can't read the last word because the background is too dark. I would consider changing the font to a lighter color so that it is easier to read.
When I looked through your shop, your photos look good, but they look inconsistent to me. Some are on white backgrounds, and some on top of book pages, and it just kind of confuses the eye a little when I browse through. I really like what you make, I think re-working the photography a bit could really help with your sales.
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Hello, I just opened shop yesterday but would so appreciate any thoughts or suggestions or if I'm missing anything as I proceed. I will be adding much more but hoping for feedback. Thanks so much to my first team! Paula
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