New book design to critique please

[avdesignz]

Hello everyone. I just designed another children storybook. It is titled 'Bathtime for Sammy'. I would appreciate andy feedback good and bad. Thanks all!

P.S. I don't know how to add the actual image in the post...if anyone can help me on that I'd appreciate it also :)

[Former_Member]

Where can we see the book design? Is it a listing (copy and paste listing url into your post)? Is it on the web?

[avdesignz]

Hi Christie, it's in my shop. Here is the listing url:
https://www.etsy.com/listing/124106351/personalized-children

[avdesignz]

Oh! That's how you show the listing :)

[Former_Member]

Wow amazing!! Love it!

[avdesignz]

Thanks Jackie! I really appreciate it.

[Former_Member]

This is a super cute idea!! What a great way to get the kids involved in the story. Very nice work, congrats! I don't think you're charging enough :)

[avdesignz]

Christie, thanks for the response. I actually just lowered the price...since I have not had a sale. I was charging $24.95 for the regular books and $29.95 for the baptism books. I thought that was fair since it takes time to create the face. Someone suggested I lower the price. I'm just waiting for my first sale :)

[Former_Member]

Well, good luck to you, they are awersome!!