New Here! :) Need Critique

[Former_Member]

Hello everyone! I'm new to this group and wanted to get a solid critique. I've been working on my shop here and there trying to find out what works. A few of my tags have been updated and some haven't just so i can see where I'm getting my views. Please let me know what you think!!

Thank you,
Melissa

[ContempoCranes]

When did you start up again with your shop? I see you opened in 2010 but I think some of your items are more recent. Some of your tags look okay but your titles could use work. Try and put what the item is as the first word because the whole title doesn't show up in search so when I look at your items such as, "Black & White Zebra Print..." I have no idea what your item is. That should start with bandana or pet bandana. And also do you have a dog? It definitely helps to have a "model" to see what the product would look like on them.

[Former_Member]

I've been working on it off and on since my opened my shop in 2010. Life has been busy as I work full time and go to school full time. I've currently set up shop and became more serious about my etsy site because I am trying to earn money for my wedding. I will definitely work on using my Chi as my model. I just wasn't sure if the size different photo was worth putting on there or if i should use something else. I really appreciate the critique! :) I plan on focusing on a lot of things with it tomorrow and getting some more toys uploaded.