Hello, Jeremy!
Your shop needs:
1. Connection with facebook and twitter to be social. And regular promo there.
2. Making detailed about page with stating there your story, and placing your shop links to twitter, facebook, instagram, pinterest.
3. Policies - you have empty field. You should place there required info.
4. Products name - you should use all possible place
5. Promotion within ETSY, you have no favorites.
