Hi Amy,
I am not sure what you are looking for specifically in a critique, but I'll give it a shot.
Your jewelry selection is neat - it's a different style and you have great photos for them.
The art that sticks out to me is the art which you photograph in frames, because it helps me visualize where I might hang it up in my own home.
You have nice colors and a nice banner.
This photo in particular catches my eye:
https://www.etsy.com/listing/122952748/wire-wrapped-pendant-faceted-briolette?
